After careful examination... I have come to a conclusion.


Admiral Tigerclaw, cannot sing.




I got the first half of the song's lyrics written, and I did a recording test trying to sing to match my vocal track, then I muted 'vocal track' and listened back. And nearly fragged the whole thing right there, but decided it would be better to send my kareoke out to amuse others.

[SERGEON GENERAL'S WARNING: Keep small animals, children, and glass objects at least three-hundred meters from the source of sound during playback. Failure to do so can result in severe instantanious brain hemoraging or shraptnel wounds.]


Incidently: Listen to the song as it's supposed to sound.
http://muyo.org/atc/cosmosremix.MP3

BLAFARGLE! MY EARS! THEY FSCKING BLEED!

I like the nonvocal track, though. You're not too bad, I gotta say.

I know, I gotta find someone to sing it now. Since I listened to it and KNEW it was bad. (I'm not tonedeaf... I know I can't sing this.)

Ah.. I finished rewriting the lyrics based on a female singer instead of a male singer.


Here they are:

INTO THE COSMOS:

**SPOKEN BY MALE**
(There are things in space, dark things.
Things that I do not know about.
But this I do know,
it takes skill to win,
power to destroy,
and wisdom, to know when.)


**Sung by female**
Off we go, into the cosmos.
We will fly, among the stars.
I will reach, into the cosmos.
I won't be scared, He won't be far.

Every day, before too long.
I come
FACE TO FACE with doubt so strong.
Then I
See you there, the skies so clear.
I know
Things are fine, while you are here.

I don't how to tell you,
I don't know what to say.
I just know that I love you,
In each and every way.

These feelings they surround me.
I fight to carry on.
I know I have to stop you.
Before you're too far gone.

Trust in me, I don't want to hurt you. (You should trust her.) <---**Parenthetical lines sung by large tenor chorus**
Never Fear, I'm here by your side. (She will be there.)
You're my Strength, I know you will protect me. (Powers beyond.)
I feel safe, in you I can confide. (If you say so.)

Let me go, into the cosmos.
Only you, can carry me.
I am off, into the cosmos.
This is where, I want to be.

Challenges, surrounding me.
These are
victories, that's soon to be.
But then
Some of these, I want to hide.
I could
Face them all, close by your side.

Please tell me that you love me.
Don't tell me you don't care.
I just want you to be there.
I'll meet you anywhere.

When I am feeling lonely.
You stand there by my side.
Somehow you know I trust you.
These feelings I can't hide.

Trust in me, I don't want to hurt you. (You should trust her.)
Never Fear, I'm here by your side. (She will be there.)
You're my Strength, I know you will protect me. (Powers beyond.)
I feel safe, in you I can confide. (If you say so.)

Off we go, into the cosmos.
We will fly, among the stars.
I will reach, into the cosmos.
I won't be scared, He won't be far.


*Musical interlude*

Off we go, into the cosmos.
We will fly, among the stars.
I will reach, into the cosmos.
I won't be scared, He won't be far.

Let me go, into the cosmos.
Only you, can carry me.
I am off, into the cosmos.
This is where, I want to be.

Off we go, into the cosmos.
We will fly, among the stars.
I will reach, into the cosmos.
I won't be scared, He won't be far.

Let me go, into the cosmos.
Only you, can carry me.
I am off, into the cosmos.
This is where, I want to be.

damn. bad damn for first part, good damn for the latter. now, if only i could finish mine.

you know, i'll pass the lyrics onto my sister and record. she's really good vocally. i'll send you the results if any.

Cool... keep me posted.