Seconded, and enthusiastically endorsed. Nice job on the self-imposed dullness of Leon's existence. (The boy
needed a kick in the ass...
) You struck a good balance on his apathy - enough don't-give-a-shit to get across that he's going through the motions, but not totally ROADed to the point that nobody wants him around (least of all, the audience).
If we go with the oft-quoted 60-90 seconds of film per page of script, that's a little less than a half-hour of movie, and we've got things rolling. So Leon gets a good swift Adam-sized boot in the ass. Now what? I eagerly await your answer - write more...