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Linked Tanka (Evangelion related verse)
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Caduceus-kun
Chibi
Joined: Fri Mar 19, 2004 4:24 pm
Posts: 5
Location: The end of linear time
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 Linked Tanka (Evangelion related verse) I walk through dying streets
And see no other person.
The sump pump clangs on.
No bird will fly near to me
Other children look away.
I?m told I?m unique,
I have a higher purpose,
That I must focus.
To speak to the boy two seats
Over is a distraction.
It is not useful.
And picking a rose might
Lead to infection.
Yet at times I hear the moon
Singing its keen crescent song,
And I find myself
Asking if I can still say
?I am not a doll.?
AN: I've read a lot of Eva fanfiction; this is influenced by it all.
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"That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die."
Ph'nglui mglw'nafh C-kun N'kai wgah'nagl fhtagn.
o/` Everybody wants a rock to wind a piece of string around! o/`
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| Mon Oct 25, 2004 5:54 pm |
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Rosenberg
Cherub
Joined: Sun Mar 21, 2004 3:52 pm
Posts: 44
Location: Bay Area, CA
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Never been much of a poetry writer...to me it's just writing with more rules! However, I do enjoy good poetry. This is excellent work (the end gave me chills). Keep writing; don't let your talent go to waste!
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"I fear not death, for I leave no place for the sword to enter."
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| Mon Oct 25, 2004 7:19 pm |
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B.T.L.
Head Pollster
Joined: Mon Mar 15, 2004 6:00 pm
Posts: 1288
Location: Like I'm going to tell you.
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Nice one. Really, really nice. 
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| Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:38 am |
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Michael J Doyle
Chibi-Czar
Joined: Fri Mar 26, 2004 9:05 am
Posts: 1590
Location: Out past Fort Mudge
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Very good. Any more on tap?
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| Tue Oct 26, 2004 11:46 pm |
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Wild Goose
Chibi-Czar
Joined: Wed Mar 17, 2004 12:47 am
Posts: 624
Location: Kota Kinabalu, Malaysia
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pretty good, all in all. And like Michael said, any more?
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